tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post6800258848630757543..comments2023-10-18T12:09:16.487-04:00Comments on j dot yu: running from uJack Yuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13938364827015195594noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-80548263274885880152008-03-24T01:26:00.000-04:002008-03-24T01:26:00.000-04:00yo sweet painting! i like it alot!yo sweet painting! i like it alot!LeMarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06909334704111920002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-56047949875203620132008-03-19T17:18:00.000-04:002008-03-19T17:18:00.000-04:00I like this! very illustrator of you :)I like this! very illustrator of you :)Dominique Funghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18034449523728963920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-36170634346967860602008-03-19T17:01:00.000-04:002008-03-19T17:01:00.000-04:00Looks neat. I think you're definitely in the righ...Looks neat. I think you're definitely in the right direction. I think you could profit by using a stronger light source and also using some cast shadows.. Its really amazing how shadows can pop things out ( nowi dont mean using black or extremely dark colours but i am talkina bout your lights might need to be lighter and darks a bit darker) Also theres no harm in using contrast ie ( warms vs cools , lighst and darks , hard and softs ) to lead the eye! Just some thoughts! keep goingBenjamin Plouffehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09980072767865866135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-77413884438174299292008-03-06T21:48:00.000-05:002008-03-06T21:48:00.000-05:00Then again now that I think again, I'm not sure if...Then again now that I think again, I'm not sure if you want to add the light source on the right. Reason is, it may affect the overall composition from all the values in the image. You have to test it, because I can't visualize it. Just giving this to keep in mind later on when you get back to finishing it. <BR/><BR/>Cheers man.Jeffrey Cheunghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13890915221287837821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-73611049801705581802008-03-06T21:46:00.000-05:002008-03-06T21:46:00.000-05:00Hey man this is a big jump from what your previous...Hey man this is a big jump from what your previous work, I'm loving the orange beard guy's face, the way it's drawn and all. <BR/>As for critique, just a reminder not to get lost in rendering and forget about the major light source. Where is the light coming from right now? The torch is definitely one, but where does the spec of light come from on the orangebeardman's forehead? It's coming from a right-ish direction. So I suggest you either change it, or you include a secondary light source on his right somewhere.Jeffrey Cheunghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13890915221287837821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-35232562387228053722008-03-06T14:50:00.000-05:002008-03-06T14:50:00.000-05:00thanks guys! but critiques are more welcome :)thanks guys! <BR/>but critiques are more welcome :)Jack Yuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13938364827015195594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-68438773181057177472008-03-06T13:02:00.000-05:002008-03-06T13:02:00.000-05:00Woah now. This is sweet!Woah now. This is sweet!Garrett Hannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00782812715581181798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-1475078498082253352008-03-05T00:52:00.000-05:002008-03-05T00:52:00.000-05:00hahaah ... true that b cooool nice everything.hahaah ... true that b <BR/><BR/>cooool nice everything.Lettie Lohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13879901347798578412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-30939593220214331302008-03-04T20:04:00.000-05:002008-03-04T20:04:00.000-05:00looks good man cool designslooks good man cool designsChris Darnbroughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16258523298478082899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-50680928833876882962008-03-03T19:07:00.000-05:002008-03-03T19:07:00.000-05:00nice work there Jack! there happy i left a comment...nice work there Jack! there happy i left a comment. Jeez can't even comment you in person anymore i gotta do it through blogspot[B]ehramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01661149529617181703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35748824.post-71624214942931108202008-03-03T04:04:00.000-05:002008-03-03T04:04:00.000-05:00This looks amazing Jack!! I think one of the best ...This looks amazing Jack!! I think one of the best I have seen from you. Congrats again on your internship placement! : )Jinny Lianghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09799932549376645598noreply@blogger.com